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]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662714071.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:26:23 +0900 I'm very tired today... There is so much to do. I drove a lot and made some documents. I enjoy it but wishe I could get home earlier and go out for a drink with my friends... Japanese tend to work too much. Job isn't the only thing that decides ones’ life.

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I'm very tired today... There are so much to do. I drove a lot and made some documents. I enjoy it but hope I can get home earlier and go out for a drink with my friends... Japanese tend to work too much. Job isn't one thing that decided their life.

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662712851.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:24:43 +0900 I feel very lonely because Yuya isn't here. He is really busy so he doesn't reply to me so many times. I know it's good for me to study English but sometimes I can't stand it. Maybe that's why I tend to buy some clothes and makeup items to forget about him...

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I feel very lonely because Yuya isn't here. He is really busy so he doesn't reply me so many times. I know it's good for me to study English but sometimes I can't stand it. Maybe that's why I tend to buy some clothes and makeup items for I forget about him...

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662711281.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:23:55 +0900 I read a book "The Strange Garden". It made me excited and next I will read another book. Reading books is one of my favorite things. Recently it has been raining so it's good to stay at home.

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I read a book "The strange garden". It made me excited and next I would read another book. Reading book is one of my favorite things. Recently it has been raining so it's good to stay at home.

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662710351.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:23:08 +0900 I really want to thank my customers. One of my customers is very kind and she always gives me some tips. We like classical music and share our knowledge. I'm looking forward to listen to pieces that she recommends. Also she gave me candies and tissue (because I had a runny nose). I'm happy to meet great customers.

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I really want to thank to my customers. One of my customers is very kind and she always gives me some tips. We like classical music and share our knowledge. I'm looking forward to listen pieces that she recommends. Also she gave me candies and tissue (because I had runny nose). I'm happy to meet great customers.

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662709214.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:21:03 +0900 Tonight there was a big farewell party for my branchmanager. My colleagues made a DVD of him and that was great. I'm glad to see him. I'm not sure if I can get along with the new branch manager but I must try...

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Tonight there was a big farewell party for my brunch manager. My colleagues made DVD of him and that was great. I'm glad to meet him. I'm not sure if I can get along with new brunch manager but I must try...

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662706470.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:19:30 +0900 Very sunny day! The typhoon is over. I feel fine like theblue sky because after working I'll go dancing.

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Very sunny day! A typhoon was over. I feel fine like that blue sky because after working I'll go dancing.

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662701950.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:17:00 +0900 Oh my god, I just realized my English skills have gottenworse! Maybe it's because I haven't written a dairy recently... I must keep it though I'm tired.

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Oh my god I just realized my English skill got worse! Maybe it's because I haven't written a dairy recently... I must keep it through I'm tired.

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662701256.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:16:26 +0900 We (Who is we?) returned from a short trip to Gifu. Maybe it's our last trip because one of my colleagues will transfer to another branch and so will I someday. I had a great time with my colleagues and embrace this precious memory...

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We returned from a short trip to Gifu. Maybe it's our last trip because one of my colleagues will transfer to another brunch and so am I someday. I had a great time with them and embrace this precious memory...

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662700489.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:15:48 +0900 I went on a short trip with some of my colleagues! Weused to work at the same branch but one of them would transfer to another brunch in Tokyo next week. We've spent time together for three years so I'm sad to knowabout the transfer. Anyway we enjoyed a lot!

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I went a short trip with my colleagues! They used to work at same brunch but one of them would transfer to another brunch in Tokyo next week. We've spent time together for three years so I'm sad to know that. Anyway we enjoyed a lot!

]]> https://ameblo.jp/ayatration/entry-11662699674.html Fri, 01 Nov 2013 15:15:12 +0900